1) Brideau’s
main point was to tell a remarkable story about a woman who “represents the
essence of hope and determination in the face of terrible adversity.” This is
indicated at the end, but throughout the story Brideau hints at how courageous Lydia
was, and how she stayed so strong-minded in the most daunting of times.
2) The
point of view was past tense and written mostly in third person, but at the
ending paragraph, first person. Brideau told Lydia’s story for Lydia. The
impact it has is less shocking then how it would be if Lydia were telling it. Anytime
someone experiences something as intense and petrifying as Lydia did, the story
told first hand is always more remarkable.
3) Brideau
made her narrative “come alive” because every detail of the story she was
telling, left you on the edge of your seat. (“Struck by, toxic, illuminated,
eager, cramped, cracked, dry, terrified, strong current, rushing like the
Colorado River, determination, terrible adversity.”) All these words appeal to
the readers’ emotions because they depict such audacity and strength, but also
heartache and grief.
4) The
audience for this piece could possibly be people like Brideau who wanted to
come and be of assistance to the victims of Hurricane Katrina. Or anyone
involved of serving the victims of Katrina in health care. Brideau’s tone suits
those readers because workers in health care are sensitive to stories and situations
like these. Brideau shows heartache for Lydia in how she tells her story, and
health care workers would also be sensitive to those emotions. “It’s Lydia’s story
that stays with me most…” “We were struck by the chemical order of a cleaning solution
so strong that it seemed toxic.” (Shows sympathy for the victims.)
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